How Can I Fix This Sentence?

Published February 22, 2014

Question by Shereese: How can I fix this sentence?
Hi! I am rewriting a part of my research paper for English, and I wanted to change the closing sentence to my paragraph. This is the sentence: “To truly understand an eating disorder, you must delve into the facts.” But, since it’s a research paper I don’t want to use the word “you”. Can you please try to reword this sentence so that it doesn’t seem like it’s in second person, but keep the same words? Much Appreciated 😀

P.S- If there are any grammatical errors or anything in the sentence feel free to correct it.
Much Appreciated 😀

P.P.S-I’m in 8th grade so try not to make a Harvard University statement. Thank you (:

Best answer:

Answer by Scott
One does not simply understand an eating disorder.

Answer by connor
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