What Is the Best Way to Re-Phrase the Following..?
Question by : What is the best way to re-phrase the following..?
“It has been almost a year now, and he disappeared from view – being involved in an aboard rehab center for troubled teens.”
What i’m trying to re-phrase is the part AFTER the dash
Best answer:
Answer by Jade
Try this:
having been sent to a rehab center for teens with problems
OR
getting into a rehab for troubled youth
Answer by LarryM
I’m thinking that the phrase ‘being involved’ is a bit too general. It could mean anything from volunteering to help patients, to being a paid staff member, to being the rehab center’s gardner, to being a patient, either voluntarily or forcefully.
So, how involved: enrolled, enlisted, forced into, etc.?
It’s been almost a year now, and he disappeared from view–forced into an aboard rehab center for troubled teens.
It’s been almost a year now, and he disappeared from view–checked into an aboard rehab center for troubled teens.
Also, the word ‘aboard.’ I’ve never heard that used in reference to a rehab center. Is it correct?
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